There was a discussion thread on rec.arts.comics.marvel.xbooks about "If you could design your own X-book, what would it be?" Since mine was relevant to Magneto, and may spark discussion, and besides, I like it :-), I'm posting it here. Note that this was before UXM #350 anbd the revelations within. I'd have more detailed plans for "Erik the Red" now. Alara's x-book: Magneto I have to confess that I think the last thing the world needs is another X-book. Nevertheless, there is an idea calling to me, and if I can trash a sucky book to make room for mine, there's only one idea that I think really begs for a book: a Magneto solo book. Magneto is a character who desperately needs a solo book in order to be portrayed as what I want to see him as: a kick-ass, take-no-prisoners, intelligent, sympathetic character. For dramatic reasons, every time Magneto has joined an X-team (whcih, when you do not have a solo book, is the only way to get any exposure), he has been wussified. Look at him in his run as headmaster of the New Mutants (where he can't beat the Avengers, babysits the New Mutants while the X-Men are dying, gets the crap kicked out of him by a Sentinel in three seconds, etc), AOA (cut to half power) and today (Joseph-- nuff said.) It doesn't have to be this way. As an X-Men *ally* but not member, Magneto kicked ass in God Loves, Man Kills, was formidable in the Savage Land two-parter (yes, Zaladane kicked his ass, but notice who was left standing at the end of that story? It wasn't Zaladane), and did credibly in Secret wars (aside from a rather ludicruous romantic interlude with the Wasp.) Basically, every time he's been a villain who happens to be working with the good guys, he's stunning. As a villain, of course, he's usually very talented but often commits fatal stupidities, because he has to lose in the end. What's the reason for this? Well, obviously, it's because other members of the team have to have something to do. Imagine if Magneto had been allowed to be effective when he was an X-Man. If the Sentinels from Rachel's future had been Sentinels like the ones in the recent Wolverine: DOFP, Magneto would have taken them all out in thirty seconds. Doesn't leave much for Rachel to do. If the X-Men had babysat the New Mutants while Magneto went alone into the tunnels to take on the Marauders, Scalphunter and Arclight, at the very least, would have been toast (body armor), and the only Maurauders who'd have had a prayer at taking him down would have been Vertigo and Scrambler, and then only if Magneto got careless. If Joseph had Magneto's skills, it would have been "Phalanx? What Phalanx?" No virus required. Again, not a lot of room for other characters to shine. The obvious solution, then, is to give Magneto a solo book. Or, if he is in a team, it's one where the other characters complement his powers. Magneto and Exodus on the same team need to get depowered or a case of the stupids, or both, before they'd ever lose against anyone short of Galactus. So "Magneto and the Acolytes" doesn't work, either, unless you carefully choose your Acolytes. Here's what I'd do: 1. The guy in Uxm #350 is deluded. Joseph is really Magneto. 2. Joseph comes to the conclusion, in the wake of OZT, that Xavier's dream does not work, never will work, and he can't live a lie any longer. He tries to express this opinion to the team. A fight ensues. Joseph ends up fleeing the X-Men, convinced that Xavier's dream is impossible but not willing to take the route of violent terrorism, and certainly unwilling to try to conquer the world or anything. He still doesn't want to be Magneto, but the X-Men believe his lack of faith in Xavier's dream is evidenec of reversion. 2. In a long story arc-- maybe twelve issues-- Joseph seeks to learn who Magneto really was, as he's come to the conclusion the X-Men have been, shall we say, a trifle biased. he goes on a quest to various places of importance in Magneto's life. In the process: a. he starts hallucinating that Magneto is giving him advice, particularly in combat when he is losing badly, but sometimes just at quiet moments too b. we, the readers, learn a lot about Magneto's past history. No more of this "man of mystery" crap. There is too much pointless mystery in X-books. Magneto is firmly established as a Jew who turned his back on his heritage because he stopped thinking of himself as human or belonging to any human subgroup. We learn the names of his family members, like his sister; we learn bits about his past from in between the parts we know about; and so forth. c. Joseph is forced to use all his wits and power to stay alive against any number of opponents who want to take Magneto down (since they are geared up for Magneto, and Joseph is less experienced than Magneto, he frequently barely makes it out with his life.) Such may include the X-Men themselves, the returned heroes, the US government, anti-mutant groups, and so on. Joseph also finds himself getting into fights with Hydra, just because they're Nazis. (in fact, once the returned heroes are fairly well etablished as back, it might be amusing to do a story where Joseph ends up working together with Captain America! Who will likely try to take him in at the end of the story, but, well, good luck.) 3. At the end of the arc, Joseph finds himself in conflict with Magneto's Acolytes. Through a plot device, Milan is brought back from the dead, because I like him and he'll be useful later. Most of the Acolytes are psychos, though, and Joseph finds himself unwilling to tolerate their behavior. In the end he takes back the mantle of Magneto, having remembered a lot (though not all) of his past life, and makes the new rules clear. He wishes to fight those who oppress the innocent, particularly humans oppressing mutans, but also humans oppressing other humans, mutants opporessing other mutants, and mutants oppressing humans. The real enemy is not, and never has been, humans; the real enemy Magneto should have dedicated his life to fighting in the first place is the forces of bigotry and hatred that caused things like the Holocaust, ethnic cleansing, and Operation: Zero Tolerance. Any such oppression is fair game. This means any mutant who hates and attacks humans is Magneto's enemy. A *lot* of the Acolytes, including Exodus, have big problems with this. Exodus decides that Charles Xavier brainwashed Magneto and he must kill him to "save" him. Magneto kicks his butt. A heartbroken Exodus takes most of the Acolytes with him and swears to restore his lord's proper mind to him or kill the impostor currently occupying his body, or die trying. The Acolytes that remain with Magneto are Milan, Amelia Voght, and Scanner, and maybe one or two others if they have the right kind of powers. That is, I want people with powers that apply well to covert ops and the kind of things Magneto *can't* do. We have a teleporter, a telepath and a cyberpath (that's why I wanted Milan-- information resource/master hacker type.) The book then follows Magneto and his very small band of followers in their quest to terrorize bigots. This is still Magneto we're talking about-- if he believes it will accomplish his purpose best to kill, he'll kill. if he needs to kidnap world leaders, threaten to destroy Peking or Washington, or kick superhero butt for interfering with him, he will. He and his group will cross over with other, more traditional hero books fairly frequently, and who wins will depend on whose book it is (that is, in his own book he'll tend to beat the Avengers, in their book they'll beat him). he will be involved in real-world politics (instead of solely whining about the oppression of mutants, he'll probably wade into conflicts where one ethnicity is trying to kill the other, and end up making matters worse because you can't solve problems like that with superheroics, but he'll try.) His "followers" will recognize him as slightly more human than he usually came across to them, since he's still missing a lot of his memories and while he's ditched the name Joseph, very often he still feels like a kid pretending to be his dad, or something, because of the missing memories. He will, mostly, be relatively sane, with a potential to wig out if placed under too much stress. He will probably try to patch up ties with the X-Men, beause even if he and they can't agree he really doesn't want to fight them, and still rather likes them and wishes them well. That would depend on whether the writer(s) of X-Men and Uncanny wanted him to be a villain or an occasional ally. Villains would include Exodus and the former Acolytes, people like Bastion or other anti-mutant organization leaders, Hydra, Fenris (grown up now), governmental agencies, and mutants or superpowered beings working for organziations that oppress other people. Also, any superhero group might show up as "villains", and Magneto is likely to get involved as an ally in any multi-book crossover where the villain is thretening all reality, or mutantkind, or anything like that.